Story board for scene 1

I apologise if this is hard to see

1. When filming the first shot we will have is a medium close up shot of a swing which still has some small movement, dramatic horror music will accompany this to build up suspense and tension but also to make the audience question 'Where are the children?' and 'What has happened?'
2. The next part is that we see is an establishing shot of the whole park which will be followed up by a pan of the area to show the extent of seclusion. The part is to still continue the tension but also to establish to the audience where they are.
3. The next part is a close up shot of the ground nothing is occurring at the time but then suddenly blood begins to drip down in front of the camera and begins to create a pool on the floor. This continues the suspense and makes the audience question what is happening but also would hopefully trick them into thinking its a zombie.
4. Afterwards we then have a slow tilt upwards from the floor upwards to show Drake (Amir) eating a sandwich with ketchup coming out which now notes to the audience that it wasn't blood before and also that Drake isn't a zombie, to the right of him is his sister Sam (Me) who is looking at him disgust at the fact that he is such a messy eater and then we have our first part of dialogue which is Sam saying to Drake "That's disgusting" followed by him shrugging his shoulders. Straight after Sam turns around and says "I'm leaving" and begins to walks out of the park which is shown through a tracking shot of the characters walking towards the camera, Drake then throws his sandwich away and catches up with his sister and asks "Where is everyone?" which is followed by her saying "Probably at that stupid cricket game".
5. Shortly after the previous shot we have Drake and Sam facing each other with the camera behind their shoulders showing the other person talking which creates a shot/ reverse shot, dialogue is once again in place here as Drake then asks "Where are all the kids?" which is answered by Sam scoffing and saying "Ha you know what kids are like these days, their probably out getting smashed"to which Drake states "Oh".
6. Occurring directly after that dialogue jets appear travelling over their heads in sky causing Sam to flinch in shock but Drake just watches them go by. Sam then says "Jesus Christ whats going on?"
7. After the last part of dialogue we have an a sky-view shot of Sam and Drake in the park which is followed by a fast zoom out of the park to the entire country then continent then all continents and then the world. Upbeat action music will accompany this.
8. We then have a medium shot of earth which will be followed by the title of the film (Legacy) and perhaps a small monologue explaining the situation.

This is what me and Amir decided on on Friday but we are meeting up today (Saturday) to discuss this scene again so there maybe changes. If this does occur then i will update the new storyboard.